Make The Picture Look Like A Crack Doll Can You Rate My Poem With A 1-10, Comments Appreciated?

Can you rate my poem with a 1-10, comments appreciated? - make the picture look like a crack doll

Paint my picture, hang it on the wall
with a knife in a Voodoo doll.
Clip my photos of these journals
Pages that turn your dreams.
and run your hands under running water
Do not leave stains.

Take my soul to move through the sand.
Let me die surrounded on this earth.
reddened eyes and remember the more effort to
the tears that seep through the cracks.
and run your hands under running water
Do not leave no stains.

Now his hands are stained Crimson clutch, cold brush
went back to the canvas with a tone of confidence
not to forget the pain and fever
look like you.

and run your hands under running water
Do not leave stains.